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Author:  Witch [ Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Bosses

There they sit
In their ivory tower
Thinking they have
All the power

Always trying to
Put me down
Looking at me
With a frown

Wish I knew
What I had done
To stop me moving
Up one rung

My opinion
I will always say
Since they don't
Like it that way

So they can
Keep there little clique
For I am strong
And they are weak

Author:  Gwenllian [ Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

Spot on Witch well said ! :)

Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

Love it!!!

Author:  Witch [ Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

Thanks,

Do you think I should show it to my boss!!!!

Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

Not unless they've got a good sense of humour or you want a p45!!!

Author:  paulpdh [ Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

I like this, thought I would add me own bit.

They may
startle you
with shock
even dare
give you a dirty
look.

Ivory towers
can fall
after all
its only a
metaphor

until then bite
your tongue
you are only
young

leave work
for the day
and remember
not to carry it
around in your
head or take
it to bed.

Author:  KaraJarina [ Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

Thanks for the read. Oh and Witch you poems are getting pretty good! Thanks Paul, you reply fitted nicely! x

Author:  Witch [ Sat Jun 25, 2011 6:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

Thanks KaraJarina,
Kind words and appreciated.

Thanks for the advice Paul.

Author:  paulpdh [ Sat Jun 25, 2011 7:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Bosses

cool, I liked your part its great

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