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Witch
 Post subject: Bosses
PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:26 pm 
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There they sit
In their ivory tower
Thinking they have
All the power

Always trying to
Put me down
Looking at me
With a frown

Wish I knew
What I had done
To stop me moving
Up one rung

My opinion
I will always say
Since they don't
Like it that way

So they can
Keep there little clique
For I am strong
And they are weak

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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: Bosses
PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:27 pm 
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Spot on Witch well said ! :)
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 Post subject: Re: Bosses
PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:29 pm 
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Love it!!!

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Witch
 Post subject: Re: Bosses
PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:30 pm 
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Thanks,

Do you think I should show it to my boss!!!!

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 Post subject: Re: Bosses
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Not unless they've got a good sense of humour or you want a p45!!!

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paulpdh
 Post subject: Re: Bosses
PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:35 pm 
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I like this, thought I would add me own bit.

They may
startle you
with shock
even dare
give you a dirty
look.

Ivory towers
can fall
after all
its only a
metaphor

until then bite
your tongue
you are only
young

leave work
for the day
and remember
not to carry it
around in your
head or take
it to bed.

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KaraJarina
 Post subject: Re: Bosses
PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:50 pm 
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Thanks for the read. Oh and Witch you poems are getting pretty good! Thanks Paul, you reply fitted nicely! x
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Witch
 Post subject: Re: Bosses
PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 6:55 pm 
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Thanks KaraJarina,
Kind words and appreciated.

Thanks for the advice Paul.

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paulpdh
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cool, I liked your part its great

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