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Young's First Love, Lost
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Author:  CharTea [ Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Young's First Love, Lost

When my heart sang it's song for you
I breathed to see you smile
Unspoken words, I know you felt
And that was enough for a while

When my heart raced at sight of you
I thought we had forever
And looking back - how long it seemed
That you and I were together

What did we know? In love's
First bloom, we felt something magical start
I wish I'd treasured each flutter of joy
If I'd known that we would part

But first love's kiss may not be last -
In life there's no guarantee
And though it's long since in the past
I wonder... Do you ever think of me?

The past is best kept for rosy views
Of edited memories fun; But
Although we lost each other
I hope we find our true one.

Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Young's First Love, Lost

I love this, very beautiful.

Author:  TanithShand [ Wed Aug 21, 2013 11:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Young's First Love, Lost

CharTea, thank you for the read X

Author:  SMacca [ Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:23 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Young's First Love, Lost

Love this, CharTea :D

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