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PhilomenaAquitaine
 Post subject: Twenty One Years
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:49 pm 
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Twenty one years have passed
Since you went to Death.
Twenty one years without
The daddy I adored.
Twenty one years have turned
Your child into a mother.
Twenty one years have faded
Your flesh into shadowed memories.
Twenty one years I've known
This absence is forever.
Twenty one years, twenty one years
I've cried.

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Mizen
 Post subject: Re: Twenty One Years
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:28 pm 
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Oh, that choked me up. You write beautifully. :(
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HogstanceBilgecrack
 Post subject: Re: Twenty One Years
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:47 pm 
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Beautifully done, Philomena.
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 Post subject: Re: Twenty One Years
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:28 pm 
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Good work. Makes me very thoughtful.

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PhilomenaAquitaine
 Post subject: Re: Twenty One Years
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:58 pm 
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Thank you. I don't write much poetry, tend to stick to prose but some things are better expressed as a poem.

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 Post subject: Re: Twenty One Years
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 9:09 pm 
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Heartfelt and real

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Nydas
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:31 am 
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Great poem, I have read this on Father's day too, good timing!

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