Oh, that choked me up. You write beautifully.
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Twenty One Years |
Twenty one years have passed Since you went to Death. Twenty one years without The daddy I adored. Twenty one years have turned Your child into a mother. Twenty one years have faded Your flesh into shadowed memories. Twenty one years I've known This absence is forever. Twenty one years, twenty one years I've cried. |
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| Author: | Mizen [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Twenty One Years |
Oh, that choked me up. You write beautifully.
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| Author: | HogstanceBilgecrack [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Twenty One Years |
Beautifully done, Philomena. |
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| Author: | WaylandCybersmith [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Twenty One Years |
Good work. Makes me very thoughtful. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Twenty One Years |
Thank you. I don't write much poetry, tend to stick to prose but some things are better expressed as a poem. |
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| Author: | Witch [ Sat Jun 18, 2011 9:09 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Twenty One Years |
Heartfelt and real |
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| Author: | Nydas [ Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:31 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Twenty One Years |
Great poem, I have read this on Father's day too, good timing! |
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