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 Post subject: Chance Meeting
PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:55 pm 
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I’m sorry, I’m sorry
-Oh don’t close your ears-
I’m sorry, I’m sorry
For all of your tears.
My words were betrayal
Your heart I rent:
I caused so much hurt
And your anger I spent.
I know it was felt
Your mum told me so
When we met at a meeting
Not long ago.
I hurt her baby,
Her treasure her love-
I know now why she
Took off her glove.

I’m sorry, I’m sorry
-Oh don’t close your ears-
I’m sorry, I’m sorry
For all of your tears.
For time and distance & no tomorrow
I killed your love and fired your sorrow.
So what was my fault?
Was I too mature?
Or was I a coward who just wasn’t sure?
I did what was right
That was my mind
I thought I’d had to be cruel
Just to be kind.

I’m sorry, I’m sorry
-Oh don’t close your ears-
I’m sorry, I’m sorry
For all of your tears.
You gave yourself
But I couldn’t receive,
I did it for you
That you must believe.
I saved you from me
And my indecision
From an imperfect love
Bereft of vision.
You gave yourself
But I couldn’t receive
I wish that I had
That I didn’t just leave.

I’m sorry, I’m sorry
-Oh don’t close your ears-
I’m sorry, I’m sorry
For all of your tears.

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Meadow
 Post subject: Re: Chance Meeting
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:55 am 
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That is a lovely poem Incontinent, I enjoyed it very much but......I still don't like your name! :lol:

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incontinent
 Post subject: Re: Chance Meeting
PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 12:18 am 
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Well thank you Meadow :) I do like your name!
My name came from the feeling that my ideas and words sometimes just flow and sometimes just dribble, and I can't control them. What were you thinking?

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Meadow
 Post subject: Re: Chance Meeting
PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 12:31 am 
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Oh! :shock: Me and my imagination!.............................

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 Post subject: Re: Chance Meeting
PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 12:36 am 
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Ahhhh....! Another wee humourism :D
Keep up the good work.

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