Hmm, think I like it
as long as it's not about me ha ha! Good point though 
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| Author: | Tanza [ Thu Jun 09, 2011 5:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Voice |
Inferiority announced with vigour Superiority humbly professed Perfect thoughts trivialize reality Uniqueness quietly confessed Arrogance whispers loudly Dumbing with deafening cries Few mock in retaliation Silence comes, effort dies No others can speak truth Or take pride in choice Notions lose their freedom To escape the preacher's voice |
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| Author: | Baggage [ Thu Jun 09, 2011 8:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Voice |
Hmm, think I like it as long as it's not about me ha ha! Good point though
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| Author: | Tanza [ Thu Jun 09, 2011 8:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Voice |
I thought you might :-> |
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Voice |
Excellent! nicely said Tanza
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| Author: | WaylandCybersmith [ Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Voice |
Interesting poem, Tanza. Sets me thinking. |
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| Author: | Nydas [ Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Voice |
This resonates with me Tanza, very wise right now methinks. 
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