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 Post subject: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 12:06 am 
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Thoughts rise in the space and distance of an absence. And in the space of the absence lies a reality.

I saw it in your eyes
The mystery of our existence
Marked by the hesitation
In your stare-
And I wondered
And held the thought

In your eye I saw
The wonder in our existence
As a one-
Yet separate in our reality-
And I wondered
And held the thought

And in my eye
I was sure you saw the fear
Of my hope in our existence
In the you of you linked
With the me of me

Yet in the turmoil of my emotion
I felt the passion in your breath
The halt-
The hesitation which said-
I love you-
And I felt the rush of love
And I knew you had marked it
In my eye.

2012

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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 1:47 am 
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GREAT! Does this mean the Poetry Vault is forming an old wave of creativity with the new. I hope so!


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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:35 am 
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eye eye ;)


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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 10:46 am 
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Hi. I've been away but thank you for the comments :D
Old and new?? Explain!

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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 12:14 pm 
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allow me to explain but I guess Debra will say I'm wrong but

I'm old - just had me buffday - won't tell u the age

and Hogstance has newly joined Grimney ;) x


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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 10:39 am 
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Well happy buffday Macca- but remember it is just another day!! ;)
I think I have a poem somewhere with that title. I'll have to look it up.

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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 5:52 pm 
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Cheers from the old grit... :D
age is only a state of mind :oops:


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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 6:07 pm 
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Hoggy is a very old established member SMacca!

Great poem Inc. I must do some more writing!

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 Post subject: Re: It's All in the Eye
PostPosted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 7:04 pm 
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Like I said, Incontinent I knew all would say I was wrong! ;)


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