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| Author: | incontinent [ Thu Oct 11, 2012 12:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | It's All in the Eye |
Thoughts rise in the space and distance of an absence. And in the space of the absence lies a reality. I saw it in your eyes The mystery of our existence Marked by the hesitation In your stare- And I wondered And held the thought In your eye I saw The wonder in our existence As a one- Yet separate in our reality- And I wondered And held the thought And in my eye I was sure you saw the fear Of my hope in our existence In the you of you linked With the me of me Yet in the turmoil of my emotion I felt the passion in your breath The halt- The hesitation which said- I love you- And I felt the rush of love And I knew you had marked it In my eye. 2012 |
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| Author: | DebraCobra [ Thu Oct 11, 2012 1:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
GREAT! Does this mean the Poetry Vault is forming an old wave of creativity with the new. I hope so! |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
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| Author: | incontinent [ Thu Oct 18, 2012 10:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
Hi. I've been away but thank you for the comments  Old and new?? Explain! |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Thu Oct 18, 2012 12:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
allow me to explain but I guess Debra will say I'm wrong but I'm old - just had me buffday - won't tell u the age and Hogstance has newly joined Grimney x
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| Author: | incontinent [ Fri Oct 19, 2012 10:39 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
Well happy buffday Macca- but remember it is just another day!! I think I have a poem somewhere with that title. I'll have to look it up. |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Fri Oct 19, 2012 5:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
Cheers from the old grit... age is only a state of mind 
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Fri Oct 19, 2012 6:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
Hoggy is a very old established member SMacca! Great poem Inc. I must do some more writing! |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Fri Oct 19, 2012 7:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: It's All in the Eye |
Like I said, Incontinent I knew all would say I was wrong!
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