Thank you so much
Have never shared my poetry before !
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Mon May 16, 2011 11:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | You Left me behind |
You left me behind when you moved on One day you were here , then you were gone You left me behind and I didn't know why no more to laugh, but only to cry You left me behind in this cold, lonely place While you travelled on through time and through space You left me behind, what was I to do? when half of my life was gone with you You left me behind and slowly I grew until one day I was whole and new You left me behind, and finally I see You left me behind so that I could find me |
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| Author: | BUR10124074 [ Mon May 16, 2011 11:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
excellent just excellent |
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Mon May 16, 2011 11:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
Thank you so much Have never shared my poetry before !
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| Author: | BUR10124074 [ Mon May 16, 2011 11:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
its also my first time and i wish you luck with whatever you wish to achieve |
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| Author: | Willow [ Tue May 17, 2011 12:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
Fabulous two new Grimnians! Poets too! Great! Hello! 
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Tue May 17, 2011 1:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
Hello, glad to be here
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| Author: | TheVamp [ Tue May 17, 2011 1:12 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
Hey. Nice to have two new sparks! Always good when new poets arrive. Cheers to you both and welcome. Hope Tanza doesn't try to eat you. Not even gonna try to explain that 
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Tue May 17, 2011 1:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
EEk! I hope someone explains!!
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| Author: | Nydas [ Tue May 17, 2011 10:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
Fear not Gwenllian Tanza is a tonic too! Welcome Bur+numbers it is great to have you here. I really enjoyed that poem. Many thanks |
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| Author: | LegoStan [ Wed May 18, 2011 6:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: You Left me behind |
Welcome Gwenllian and BUR10124074! 
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