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| Author: | Fox [ Fri Sep 07, 2012 12:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
Happiness or there the lack of See the mirror in my eyes hear the voice that says my name feel the bleakness of life. Happiness or there the lack of Touch the essence, the hurt fall to keep running fade away Happiness or there the lack of What's this state I find myself in? each and every breath brings despair if for a moment, it's not repair... |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Fri Sep 07, 2012 7:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
Awwwww this is great but sad! |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Fri Sep 07, 2012 8:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
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| Author: | Fox [ Fri Sep 07, 2012 9:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
Thanks, part 1 I guess you could say is "Happiness" and part 2 is the "Realisation" of the lack of which completes the set.  Would this process be called delusion one would wander, or is that "happiness" it's self? 
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
Perfect happiness is an unobtainable illusion. |
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| Author: | Surreal [ Sat Sep 08, 2012 2:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
I liked it, In a mellon collie kinda way x |
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| Author: | KALVOS [ Mon Sep 10, 2012 2:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
Yes. Do write more Mr Fox. |
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| Author: | Fox [ Mon Sep 10, 2012 12:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Happiness or there lack of (part 2) |
KALVOS wrote: Yes. Do write more Mr Fox. Thanks.
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