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| Author: | Witch [ Sun May 08, 2011 9:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | My world |
I sit there All is quiet All is still In my world They sit there Noise buzzing People all around In their world I move No one notices No one cares In my world They move People notice People care In their world I go to talk But what's the point They don't want me In their world They go to talk But what's the point I don't want them In my world At least I'm happy there!!!! |
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| Author: | Tanza [ Mon May 09, 2011 1:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
Brilliant! I love this. So true in so many ways. Who wants to live in a world where you can't be yourself? If you can't be yourself...what's the point in being YOU!? If you pretend to be someone you're not...you just end up with lots of things in your life that you don't really like...but are too stubborn/afraid to admit it. |
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| Author: | Witch [ Mon May 09, 2011 7:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
Thanks, Glad you liked it. |
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| Author: | WaylandCybersmith [ Mon May 09, 2011 9:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
You are welcome in my world. |
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| Author: | Witch [ Mon May 09, 2011 9:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
Thanks Waycyber, I think. |
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| Author: | Elvira [ Tue May 10, 2011 5:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
Hi Witch, Your words really struck a chord with the younger me that lives inside the woman that I am now, so I hope you don't mind me writing a reply. Your words really time warped me back, nicely done! Dear Witch, I read your words, So clear and plain. And tell you, I have felt the same. Until a lesson Learnt one day, Transformed the world In which we play. When obviously You don't belong, Remember; You are right not wrong. You words have worth, Your feelings too, And out there, There are more like you. Don't waste your time On those who can't, But rather Tell them, 'No I shan't!' I shall not waste My time on you, On all the Pointless things you do. Now this new world, My life, my rules, Has happily Removed the fools. And looking out With different eyes I see a world Without their lies. I see a world With more like me, With minds That rainbow bright, can see. I hope your world Is just like mine, And soon, A universe you'll find |
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| Author: | Witch [ Tue May 10, 2011 7:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
Thanks for the inspiration Elvira x |
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| Author: | Tanza [ Tue May 10, 2011 8:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
Ooh...I was telling legostan about a poem I had written that was similar to his. It's also along the same lines as this one of yours. When I get back to my pc tomorrow, I'll make sure I find it and post it. I was always being criticized for being 'too happy'. In the end, I couldn't bear the constant nagging. Since when was being too happy ever a crime? Don't think so! Ahahhhh!! |
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| Author: | Witch [ Tue May 10, 2011 8:09 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
Tanza, Stay happy, I've never worked out how. Seem to have been on a negativity path since childhood. But maybe here will help. Its quite a sense of relief to get everything out my head. |
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| Author: | Tanza [ Tue May 10, 2011 8:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My world |
I remember negativity...it was a very annoying and unwelcome guest until I booted everyone out of my life who tried to make me feel ashamed of who I am. Then it was bye bye them and hello ME! Sometimes we rely far too much on what other people think of us and not enough on what we think of ourselves. If you think you're a pretty decent person, then you probably are! You're obviously very creative. Ignorant people hate that. Whatever you do, don't live your life to please other people, or you'll get to the end of it and realize you haven't even lived...and THAT's just sad! |
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