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| Author: | SMacca [ Sat Aug 04, 2012 7:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Take Me Out! |
And then there's a deathly silence, did you hear correctly? Everyone tries to understand whether THAT was actually said Can this be real, thinks they, whilst making body waves obtusely Who will speak out in objection, will it be the first who turns red? Sighs and gasps all around, eyes fall gazing at the ground Freedom of speech and liberation escapes And what more appropriate medium than through sound Credibility all gone, now shocked at the videotapes "A time and place for everything!" Finally, a brave has courage to say "If you need to express yourself, you could think of writing a novel?" (Brits are so polite, why don't you metaphorically slap him today!) Because you are acting as if you're the one who should grovel AWKWARD! So Perlease Take Me Out! |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Sat Aug 04, 2012 8:23 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Take Me Out! |
It's good I think but it's a bit deep for me |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Take Me Out! |
Get Back to Work! |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Take Me Out! |
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