Well, you made a difference to our poetry night Iceman!
Hope you're coming to the next one!
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| Author: | Iceman [ Fri Jul 20, 2012 10:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | A Shadow In Life |
My life is but a shadow. I exist but in reality there is no me. I am there because I am seen I am seen and hence expected But, there is no me. If i disappear there would be no change The same things would occur I make no difference It is not lonely. It is more real than loneliness A sense of lost. A sense of no direction. I fear that i am swallowed whole Irrational.. if you are not I A pitiful existence From a pitiful man. Words cannot console such thoughts A mistake so many people make. Only strength of my mind and spirit Stand a mortal chance. But I weaken. The reckoning is due When your worth is in question Why should this wretch be saved. I look for guidance I look for reason I look for love. I find only my shadow. But it's not really there. Is it?. |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Fri Jul 20, 2012 10:59 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A Shadow In Life |
Well, you made a difference to our poetry night Iceman! Hope you're coming to the next one!
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Fri Jul 20, 2012 11:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A Shadow In Life |
Things would change for the worst if you weren't here Iceman, your words can console, make me laugh, cry or be thankful, you are very much here x |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A Shadow In Life |
Here here
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| Author: | KaraJarina [ Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:41 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A Shadow In Life |
That's got so much power Iceman. It goes so deep. Very moving. Hope all is OK. X |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A Shadow In Life |
Thanks all  just experimenting with different formats and feelings.. some good some bad, enjoying the writing thats the main thing ! x
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| Author: | Meadow [ Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A Shadow In Life |
Please come again on Tuesday Iceman, experiment a bit more
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