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TanithShand
 Post subject: Startling Star
PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:41 pm 
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This is my first proper poem since poet's corner so please be kind!

O Rising star
Be gentle to others during
Your travels to afar
Don't knock those touring
On your way up
With that much light and speed
You could blow-up
But your light could indeed
Extinguish if you fall
Like an exploding boomerang
A disintegrating downfall
So take some advice
Bring that golden compass
Wrapped in a sacred device
& please don't lose your grip
and become a complete ass!
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Meadow
 Post subject: Re: Startling Star
PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:45 pm 
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Not a bad first effort Tanith but don't give up the day job! :D

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SMacca
 Post subject: Re: Startling Star
PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:50 pm 
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Yes please don't give up Bumblecrack we need you there my fittest friend !! ;)
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Meadow
 Post subject: Re: Startling Star
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Stop being such a creep SMacca. We don't need her! We have enough trouble finding boyfriends without miss fancy pants doing cartwheels 'cross the floor :D

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SMacca
 Post subject: Re: Startling Star
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shhhhuuusshh - she might hear you!! :lol:
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