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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:19 am 
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Thirteen
A boy wants
His
Father
Needs.
Maybe.

I'm not rejected,
Just left.
An unfortunate
Umbrella.

While the deified
Sowed and reaped.

He's not dead.
Just gone,
As I mourn
At his bedside.
Lie down
to bathe in
Grief.

Then rise
Leaving black Lilies
On his pillow.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:41 am 
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so sad :(


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:04 am 
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Yes it is very sad but life is a mosaic of sadness and happiness, and I like to use all the bits of broken glass...

I hope I don't make you sad with it though.

*hugs*

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:12 am 
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Simple, poignant, and beautifully sad. Thanks eve. :cry:


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:19 pm 
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Thank you Karajarina.

I'll share a little.

My son went to live with his father when he was 13. I'm not very good at expressing how I feel about it - but poetry helps.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:55 pm 
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So very sad.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 12:21 am 
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A powerful heartfelt poem.
I like the way you have used the images such as 'An unfortunate
Umbrella' - 'the deified' and structured your words.
Thank you

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 9:42 am 
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Brilliant.

evenaive wrote:
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My son went to live with his father when he was 13 ....

*hugs*


I believe a boy who goes through those years without a father spends the rest of his life looking for one ... so maybe for the best. He'll come back.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 7:55 pm 
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This is a beautiful poem, so poignant, thanks for sharing Eve
(hugs)x

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 Post subject: Re: 13
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 4:42 am 
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I'm touched by that. Thanks for sharing. x


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