The Land of Grimney - The Illustrated Adventures of Cora Pearl, aged 12

Hush, Shhh! Quietness is not for me; I’m
Not a muted man. Commit to choice, the
Cool of shade? and mask your silent crime;
Prisoner to your personality.
Shackled to your pride, quiescent victim of
Your shame. No audience to entertain’
A member of a one-man-band, in love
With solitude, and partner to disdain.
Take yourself away from me I
Cannot comprehend it. It’s your disease;
Timidity; affliction of the shy.
The noiseless silence leaves me ill-at-ease.
Sing to me my friend, it’s your choice?
I’m afraid, and need comfort in your voice.

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"Never look down on a man unless you're helping him up." Jessie Jackson

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